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Post#1  Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 6:02 pm  Reply with quote + 
A friend and i are working on planning a fanfic about Sirius, Altair etc and how the Omni cube was made and stuff.

I just wanted to share the overall ideas we had. It runs in on Bomberman 64 and TSA.
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The Angel of Light and Shadow created the universe and was split into Mihael and Sthertoth, and the Omni Cube was created to seal Sthertoth away.

A being named Xanth stole the cube and hid it on Thantos (Which at the time was a paradise planet) where 5 teenagers, descendants of the Celestial founders, lived; Atair, Sirius, Orion, Artemis and Regulus.

Sirius and Altair are best friends and Regulus is Altair's brother.

Xanth's mortal enemy, Zakheudol Ijavukahn, builds an army and sends his army to Thantos to find the cube. Altair and Sirius find it before them.

After finding it, Altair and Sirius both become greedy for the power the cube has and start fighting over it, forcing Thantos to lose its life energy and become the dark planet it is now.

Sirius ends up escaping with the cube and flies into space in his grandfather's (his grandfather is the Celestial Elemental knight XD) rainbow palace.

Altair, Regulus, Orion and artemis, the only other survivors of the planet's attack steal Zakheudol's ship (the black fortress) and chase him.

They succeed in stealing the cube

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Bomberman 64 events here
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Regulus ends up destroying the cube, and in the process freed Sthertoth's essence from it, allowing him to possess Rukifellth.

As a punishment, Mihael commands Regulus to work as one of her Elemental knights for the rest of eternity.

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Second Attack events here
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Special addition: A tragic story of Sirius's childhood is meantioned in the fanfic. When Sirius was 5, he had a fight with his father on Christmas morning. his parents allowed him to stay home for the Holiday and cool off for a change. The next morning, Sirius noticed that he was alone and he heared a knock on the door, when he oppened it, he was told that his parents had died the night before, on their way home to check on him. He realized that if he had gone with them, they wouldnt have needed to come home to see him and they would have stayed overnight as they usually had.
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Post#2  Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 7:47 pm  Reply with quote + 
That actually sounds like an interesting story concept. If you decide to make it I'll check it out.

Do you use Fanfiction.net? I used to be active there and I worked on a few bomberman stories. My username was Regulus777.
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Post#3  Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 8:34 pm  Reply with quote + 
I actually plan to do that.

To clear up a plot hole you might notice:

Only Sthertoth's spirit is in the Omni-cube, his ressurected body is contained in the Celestial stone.

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I also mixed in a few refferences to Bomberman 64

1) Sirius is meantioned as a exceptionally good card player.
2) Altair has a pet cat named Vega.
3) Artemis is a light pyromaniac.
4) Regulus at one point states that he "hates how his face looks" and hides it alot.
5) Orion is reffered to as an engineering nut and he loves to build big machines.

And a few noteable things are:

1) Sirius's grandfather is named "Leo".
2) Green Garden (stage 1 of BM64) appears as a park on Thantos which gets ripped out to serve as an Anchor.
3) There is a slight romantic connection in the beggining between Artemis and Sirius.
4) Orion has an adopted sister named "Gemini" who isnt one of the Celestail Descendants, contrary to her name. (she is breifly Altair's girlfriend before she dies)
5) In a scene where Sirius dresses up for a date (Its meant to be alot like earth in real life and not like how things are in the game) and he wears cufflinks with bird shapes on them (Reffering to how he looks alot like a bird)


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Post#4  Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 10:06 pm  Reply with quote + 
lol, that sounds even better now. You've got one guy lined up to read it.
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Post#5  Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 9:49 pm  Reply with quote + 
OH THANK THE GODS SOMEONE ELSE IS GOING TO WRITE BOMBERMAN FANFICTION.

*was going a leetle crazy at seeming to be the only active writer in the barely existent fandom*

*pokes her other friend to finish HIS fic*
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Post#6  Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 10:32 pm  Reply with quote + 
Credit for a few of these ideas goes to Altair, BTW (the member here, he is the one helping me with this)
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Post#7  Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 11:56 pm  Reply with quote + 
Yes yes! By the way... I have some things on Leo I must inform you on...

I got it messed up with Reggy's, aparantely... :oops: 

But if you want we could change it now or leave it alone, or make it a plot twist.... ><
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Post#8  Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 2:40 am  Reply with quote + 
Sounds good, very good.
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Can't wait. Until then, I'll be updating Serenity Chronicles every day, mostly.
Um....
Hlo thar, I'm new.

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Post#9  Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 7:10 pm  Reply with quote + 
Oy >.< im gonna have to change Sirius's grandpa's name now lol. No worrys, its no big deal.

Sirius is the only one who can touch the Omni-Cube with his bare skin. They figure out that it can be used to obsorb life energy when Sirius throws it at Zakheudol's soldiers out of defence and it obsorbs them into it.

Altair gets shocked by it once, but all the other times he holds it, he has gloves on.

When Altair first meets Orion, hes making doodles of the 5 Big Bosses that appear in the anchors/black fortress in the game (IE: Hot Avenger, High tech Harvester etc)

also, I want to add one qucik Spoiler:

Sirius ends up using the Omni Cube to drain planet energy after his grandfather gets killed and he decides to take out his pain on everyone else. This causes Altair to distrust him and Artemis to fear him (and break up with him). Once Altair steals the cube, Regulus convinces him to use it for the very same reason Sirius did. Since Altair cant touch the cube, it takes alot longer to use than it would if Sirius was handling it.
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Post#10  Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 9:45 pm  Reply with quote + 
It's better if we tackle any bugs early one. >< Sorry! I'll try to prevent more from happening.

Also: That explains why Altair's hands are circles and not finger'd like Sirius and Regulus. :hilarious:  They're just gloves.

...Let's not spoil everything now. o-o We have to keep some secrets. X3
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Post#11  Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 9:53 pm  Reply with quote + 
Chapter 1 part 2 is almost drafted (each chapter has 2 parts to it)

One its done, I will type it up and post it here.
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Post#12  Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 10:00 pm  Reply with quote + 
I am so proud. :laugh: 

:steam: Hey wait a minute!

You punctuated and all that good stuff, right? o-o;;
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Post#13  Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 12:51 am  Reply with quote + 
I hope you did. Otherwise it shalt probably be painful to read.
Other than that, sounds good.
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Post#14  Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 7:14 pm  Reply with quote + 
I'll probobly post ATLEAST chapter 1 part 1 by monday, perhaps sooner.
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Post#15  Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 5:06 pm  Reply with quote + 
Yes, its been a long time since I posted any part of my story, but my friend said I should list the characters that appear in it. I thought the idea was good, so Im gonna. It mixes Characters from all 3 N64 games and a mess of Fanchars. For your benefit, I am putting M, F or N/A about Genders.

-"Hero" Characters-
Sirius M
Altair M
Artemis F
Gemini F
Regulus M
Orion M
Aileauron M

-"villian" Characters-
Zakheudol Ijavukahn M - Demonic Leader of the Evil empire
Mektoiralh Ijavukahn M - Zakheudol's brother
Sthertoth M - God of Chaos
De Milo M - Zakheudol's plant-based general
Orion (Same Orion as in the hero section. you'll see why later) M
Vokin The Holy M - The Ruler of Holy fire. Under Zakheudol's control.

-Temple Guardians-
Pistol=White Glacier N/A - Guards the Blackwave Armor
Soul=Silver Sanctuary N/A - Guards the Vega armor
Boomerang=Green Garden N/A - Guards the Shining armor
Corona=Golden Pyramid N/A - Guards the Mammon armor
Lagoon=Blue Resort N/A - Guards the Burner Armor
Trifid=Red Moutain N/A - Guards the Shockwave armor

-Obstacle Characters-
Shiro bom/Bomberman M
Pommy M
Bagular M
Evil Bomber M
Nitros M
The 4 Devils of Garaden N/A

-Supporting Characters-
Canis M - Sirius's grandfather
Angel of Light and Shadow N/A
Orions Machines (Hot Avenger, Sewer Savage, etc) N/A
Leo M - Altair and Regulus's Father
Draco F - Altair and Regulus's Mother
Elemental Knights N/A
Aquila F - Altair and Gemini's Daughter
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