Bomberjack
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 #3 Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 5:20 pm |
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| *Aaaaah, I’m sorry Sora! I copied a name off you! But Shiro Yogeki seems to suit him....>_o |
lulz, you're cute.   You wouldn't be the first on to steal things from my fanon. At least you gave credit, though, unlike the person who plagiarized the first chapter of an ancient version of Magic Knight Erina on (of all things) a Seventh-Day Adventist forum...
Anyway, very solid chapter, and I'd be interested in reading more. One tip: I think this could benefit from a little more prose description, i.e., stuff that would describe setting, or that would describe the characters. You do some of it here, but...needs moar?
Keep writing! This fandom needs to stay alive.  |
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